I just went back and re-read the whole story, seeing as its been forever since I read it last, and I wanted to tell you again that you are a really talented writer. This along with the forum roleplay are really showing how creative you are, and how good you are at putting your ideas into writing.
Anyways, I really like the latest installment, keep it comming.
Oh, and I also like how you've got all the parts in the same post.
'There's no point staring at an empty doorway' - Le Puissant Dragon